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Post by Jacob Black on Jan 10, 2010 4:32:44 GMT
Jacob Ephraim Black
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Getting the basics’ This is the way how it just started
Full name
Jacob Ephraim Black
Nicknames
Jake
Age
16
Species
Shape shifter
Date of re-birth
N/A
Date of birth
April 30th, 1993
Hometown
La Push, Washington
Actual residence
La Push, Washington
Character Appearance ´ Let’s take a look at on the mirror
Height
6'5
Weight
230 lbs.
Skin tone
Tan
Eye colour:
Dark Brown
Hair colour
Black
Any special markings
Pack Tattoo
Played by:
Taylor Lautner
- Jacob, by most peoples' standards, is a very attractive young man. He has the "tall, dark, handsome stranger" effect that makes most people weak in the knees. Standing at a massive 6'5, his hight is needed to supports his strong body. 230 pounds of solid, finely sculpted muscle frames his tall body. He has smooth, russet skin and jet black hair. His deep brown eyes are warm and honest, and they bear his soul.
His fashion sense is somewhat limited. Jacob's family doesn't have much money, leaving him to only be able to wear what he can find. Due to that fact that his temperature is so high constantly, he's usually dressed lightly. Around his pack he can usually be found only wearing shorts and he's usually barefooted. Away from his pack and in public, jeans and a t-shirt with a simple pair of sneakers. -
Character Personality ´ The person beyond the looks
Likes
Bella Music Food His Pack His Tribe
Dislikes
Edward Vampires in general Shredding his clothes People butting into his business Rudeness
Hobbies
Eating Sleeping Working on cars Hanging out with friends
Goals/ wishes:
To own his own mechanic shop Bella falling in love with him Being the best he can be Being able to protect all the people he cares for
Worst fears:
Losing his family and friends Losing Bella
Strengths
Physically strong Fast Smart Loyal Kindhearted
Weaknesses
Can be far to envious Jumps to conclusions Doesn't trust easily Isn't very nice to the other vampires
Special Talent
N/A
- Jacob is an extremely lively young man, with a positive outlook on life. He's been through allot in his life, losing his mother at an early age and physically taking care of his disabled father. Having been through such things has left him with a strong sense of duty and responsibility. Jacob is very friendly and goes out of his way to make new friends, but also to help his friends and loved ones.
He tries to look on the bright side, but is occasionally is brought down. He's deeply in love with someone who isn't in love with him, which also bothers him a little. Unrequited love is something Jacob never thought he'd have to deal with, but he somehow manages to. If Jacob could live by a motto, it'd be "let a smile be your umbrella."
Even though Jacob has suffered set backs in his life, he's a happy guy. He's got a bright out look on life and is pretty much optimistic. He's a hard worker and believes in doing honest work no matter how long is takes. Overall, Jacob is an A+ guy.–
Character History ´ Those tales you cannot find on books
Family
Ephraim Black- Great Grandfather Bill Black- Father Rebecca and Racheal- Sisters Mother- Deceased
-Jacob has lived all of his on the Indian Reservation in La Push. The community is very close leaving Jacob with a deep pride in his heritage and family. Jacob spent most of his childhood playing with his friends and exploring the reservation. When Jacob's father became disabled, he was forced to grow up faster than he should've. He loves his family very much and would do anything for them, even die for them.
Jacob is a very good student, and a smart young man. He earns high marks in all his classes. He studies hard, and also works hard. He works free lance on cars, only making money when people play for him. Jacob has a sense of responsibility and is very thankful when he receives something.
Jacob has been very good friends with Bella Swan since she moved to Forks. When she's not at the Cullen's house (much to his charging), she's hanging out on the reservation with Jacob and the other members of the pack. His other best friends are Quil and Embry and he's slowly becoming to accept Sam as his friend. –
Role-play Sample ´ It’s time to prove your value
-Jacob slid out from underneath the truck he was working on. Slightly rubbing the sweat from his head, he grabbed a drink from the coke he was drinking. Sliding back under the truck, he started working on the various things he needed to do. He sighed when he realized that there was to much to be done in one afternoon. He worked all afternoon and into the early night.
He finally slid out from under the truck all greasy and covered with oil. "Great, just great." Jacob grumbled as he walked into the small house he shared with his father. When he walked inside the kitchen, his father smiled at him. "Did you get all your work done?" his father asked him. Jacob grunted and slid down in the chair next to his father. "That bad, huh?" Billy asked. "I didn't think it would be so bad, but I was wrong." Jacob sighed, laying his head back.
Jacob's father saved him a plate of the night's dinner and heated it up for him. "Do you have any plans this weekend?" Billy asked. "I've got to finish that truck, I'll probably be doing it through tomorrow afternoon. I might hang out with the guys, just whoever's up for doing something." Jacob said off handed. They continued eating dinner and making light chat, catching up with what the other had done the past week.
When they finished, Jacob helped his father wash up the dishes. After wards Jacob took a shower, washing the grime of the day away from his skin. When he finished, he went in his room and found that it could stand straightening up. He straightened up his room, then turned his attention to some of the homework he had. He decided that since he was working on some, he might as well finish it. Finishing, he then checked it to make sure it was all correct and then put it away. Looking up at the clock, he noticed it was almost midnight. As his eyes began to get heavy, he climbed into bed and settled in and slowly drifted off into a deep, peaceful sleep. -
Pulling the mask out ´ Time to know a little about you
Name
Jake
Age
18
Have any more characters here?
None for the time being
How have you found us?
Through "Blessed"
What is the password of the rules?
ADMIN EDIT
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Post by Twilight Angel on Jan 11, 2010 0:44:01 GMT
Pending!!
Okay, there are some a few things I would like to see a little more developed in Jacob (since he's a cannon and such, I've to be sure you capture him well enough ) :
appearance description: it's too short. I know it's difficult, but try to give it a little more detailed and solid vision;;
personality: it's not that bad at all, but if you could try and had a little more depth on it, it would be perfect;;
RP Sample: not that it is bad, but need a little more size... try to make it up to 300 words at leastin two paragraphs, only then you would be able to get more IC;;
grammar: there are just some spelling mistakes I noticed, fix them
It looks like a lot but it's not that much, but I'm sure you can fix this in 10 minutes.
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Post by Jacob Black on Jan 11, 2010 4:46:46 GMT
Allright, I tried to follow your advice and go a little deeper. Let me know if there's anything else. :]
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Post by Twilight Angel on Jan 11, 2010 13:35:22 GMT
Accepted!!
Problems Fixed. I really liked what you added now and it's much more developed than before, nice work. You might now take your claims and have fun around and.. Welcome to Sweet Surrender Jake
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